Notes About The Poem

A Penny For Your Thoughts

It is in the grey of icy evenings
When those dimly-lit wishes seem to fade,
A bitter nip, a woe this season brings
The chafing of hope's ardor, delayed.
Even though I grieve during the passage
Of summer’s festive and vigorous trails
How could I not ponder on this new stage;
As the quiet of misty Fall unveils
Reflective pauses where breaths gently ease
The dark and long wait of unanswered squall;
Endowing thoughts with a hymnal reprise
And, guiding stillness with poise that enthrals.

It must be the cold flakes in dusk-like stent
That restores hope with godly contentment.



Sara Kendrick’s A Penny For Your Thoughts Contest
“Hope is faith holding out its hand
 in the dark.” ~George Iles
-----------
by nette onclaud
3/20/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Nette, Thanks for participating in my contest..I enjoyed reading your work.Awesome deep thought quote that youn used..Sorry about being so long in thanking you personally..Sara
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 10:54 PM
A 7 ! ! Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Lindley Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your win. Bravoooooo!!!!
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Hi Nette, stopping back to congratulate your on your win for this lovely, inspiring poem. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Exquisite write Nette! Congrats on fine win!
Shumba Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Great stuff,cant deny this....by the way im new.
Nunez Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 8:21 AM
A lovely write on Hope which is one of the gifts the remains eternal. Congratulations on being chosen as POTD, Nette. Galing! Hugs! :) Kim
Lindley Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Excellent sonnet my friend. Every verse is brilliant writing. I am not shocked at all to now see this has been chosen as POTD. Adding this one to my fav list and thanks... A7..
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Congratulations, Nette. Beautiful poem. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD. I enjoyed it very much Nette! 7
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Back with my congrats, Nette...a perfect choice for TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
Wheeler Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Very nice Congrats
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Nette, congratulations on Poem of the Day
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 12:44 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs & <3
Williams Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 12:31 PM
I have many thoughts, but no pennies. Well written.
Anish Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Nice picture of the seasons here. Did you win a contest with this ode? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:57 AM
I didn't realize this was poem of the day until I read some of the comments. I think they made an excellent choice. Congratulations!
Nance Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Beautiful thoughts, now if only I had a penny to give you. Grats on poem of the day :)
Nyaga Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 6:45 AM
nice poem*******blessings
Yvonne Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:39 AM
Love this nette, Congratulations. A great read for Poem Of The Day!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 2:53 AM
I love it Nette so inspirin and so beautifully interpreted.. :)! Love it..!! KUDOS for potd..olive eloisa
Squyres Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:28 AM
So beautiful !! Love a sonnet !! Best of luck in the contest !!
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 4:59 AM
- Lovely poem, dear Nette - I wish you best of luck in the contest ... and a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:46 PM
Though the words are soft and tender the praise that raises is powerful and loud . . . sweet, wonderful, and precious are these thoughts -- Sara got a bargain for a penny! 7
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:07 PM
Yes, it's on the coldest, darkest days we need to call upon our faith to find hope. I am enthralled by the beauty and wisdom of your sonnet...hugs, Rhonda
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace