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A Penny For Your Thoughts

If I can tell what's on my mind, And tell it just the way I feel: That you are gentle and kind, Or are morally blind, Oh well... Won't it be easy and swell? If I can speak then straight from my heart, And say, you pissed me off from the start, Or you brighten my day, I am crazy about you, if I may. And if I can plainly state what I think: You smell sweet as a rose, Or like a skunk you stink; Will it make the world a better place to live If I reveal my folly, foible and pet peeve? With your life at stake, What would you say? Would you court a lie to save the day, Or in the realm of truth would you let your heart sway? Would you wear a smile over your grim face and lie when your sins you confess, Or fall on your knees and cry? What would this life be like If it were only black and white And no shades of gray? No dusk or dawn But just stark nights and bright sunny days? We walk the corridors of twilight And shy away from pitch darkness and the focus of the spotlight; Our thoughts are the most precious -- Good, evil, noble or vicious, We hold them oh so dear, And tiptoe through life lest someone should hear!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/15/2015 2:24:00 PM
I love the honesty in this write Abdul - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2015 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poignant write!
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Date: 1/15/2015 7:36:00 AM
I love how you expressed the complexity of inner thoughts and honesty...thank God this colorful world has many shades of gray! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:52:00 PM
Abdul, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:47:00 PM
I like how you conveyed the rareness of your private thoughts in a most splendid way, abdul... well done. huggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/12/2014 2:52:00 PM
I am glad you liked it. I always respect your opinion. Thanks for taking time to read my poem.
Date: 10/11/2014 4:14:00 PM
Yes we think & think for me the mind chatter seems endless glad to see I'm not alone thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/12/2014 2:48:00 PM
My mind neither. I am never sure whether to tell the truth or just make the other person happy. I guess this poem conveys my pet peeve. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 10/9/2014 10:45:00 PM
oh, I really love the theme of this one. Our thoughts are so private when we don't want to be cruel to others and some people just voice their cruel thoughts anyway. I believe there is a lot of grey in this world and those who think it is all black or white need to wake up and smell the roses!!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:45:00 AM
If you find someone who can speak his mind, he's your true friend. Appreciate your comments. I am some how attached to this poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs