A Penny For Your Thoughts

If I can tell
what's on my mind,
And tell it just
the way I feel:
That you are gentle and kind,
Or are morally blind,
Oh well...
Won't it be easy and swell?

If I can speak then
straight from my heart,
And say, you pissed
me off from the start,
Or you brighten my day,
I am crazy about you, if I may.

And if I can plainly
state what I think:
You smell sweet as a rose,
Or like a skunk you stink;
Will it make the world
a better place to live
If I reveal my folly,
foible and pet peeve?

With your life at stake,
What would you say?
Would you court a lie
to save the day,
Or in the realm of truth
would you let your heart sway?

Would you wear a smile
over your grim face and lie
when your sins you confess,
Or fall on your knees and cry?

What would this life be like
If it were only black and white
And no shades of gray?
No dusk or dawn
But just stark nights
and bright sunny days?

We walk the corridors of twilight
And shy away from 
pitch darkness and 
the focus of the spotlight;

Our thoughts are the most precious --
Good, evil, noble or vicious,
We hold them oh so dear,
And tiptoe through life
lest someone should hear!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 2:24 PM
I love the honesty in this write Abdul - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on your win with this poignant write!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 7:36 AM
I love how you expressed the complexity of inner thoughts and honesty...thank God this colorful world has many shades of gray! Hugs, Rhonda
A   Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Abdul, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Onclaud Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:47 PM
I like how you conveyed the rareness of your private thoughts in a most splendid way, abdul... well done. huggs
Mandani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:52 PM
I am glad you liked it. I always respect your opinion. Thanks for taking time to read my poem.
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 4:14 PM
Yes we think & think for me the mind chatter seems endless glad to see I'm not alone thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
Mandani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 2:48 PM
My mind neither. I am never sure whether to tell the truth or just make the other person happy. I guess this poem conveys my pet peeve. Thanks for your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 10:45 PM
oh, I really love the theme of this one. Our thoughts are so private when we don't want to be cruel to others and some people just voice their cruel thoughts anyway. I believe there is a lot of grey in this world and those who think it is all black or white need to wake up and smell the roses!!
Mandani Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:45 AM
If you find someone who can speak his mind, he's your true friend. Appreciate your comments. I am some how attached to this poem.
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