Adeleke Adeite Poet Rhyme

A Pen In Paradise

I soared into the soothing 
skies,
exploring its expanse with 
my eyes;
and with my pen, just to 
paint paradise.

(c) Adeleke Adeite.
A twenty-word poem for 
Twenty/Twenty Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 7, 2012 at 8:01 AM When I click on one of your poems I know it will be outstanding Adeleke. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Kim Merryman March 9, 2012 at 5:56 PM Nicely done, Adeleke. Creative and descriptive. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2012 at 2:09 PM Congrats on your win in PD contest..Sara

Laura Breidenthal March 7, 2012 at 1:36 PM A late congratulations on a well deserved win indeed! Very nice imagery. Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2012 at 10:20 AM ADELEKE,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2012 at 7:26 PM congrats Adeleke on an awesome write and win.. super imagery fashioned to behold luv..

Michael J. Falotico March 6, 2012 at 6:03 PM Congrats my friend. Michael

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2012 at 8:47 PM Congrats on your win, Adeleke! Sorry so late...trying to catch up on all of the great contest wins. Blessings, Rhonda

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 3, 2012 at 10:51 AM This made me smile, Adeleke-- yes writing sure can be paradise! Enjoyed your thoughts here, Super congrats on your win!

Ralph Taylor March 3, 2012 at 8:00 AM Congrats, Adeleke. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2012 at 5:41 AM Congrats on your win...Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, we can go anywhere with our pen ..Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2012 at 11:38 PM wow, you did amazing with twenty words. A very well deserved win, Adeleke!! congrats.

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 7:57 PM ADELEKE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Samual Ronthorpe March 2, 2012 at 4:18 PM Adeleke, awesome words, beautiful thought. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Debbie Guzzi March 2, 2012 at 11:02 AM Yes we almost can't believe the beauty so we must record it! Congrad's Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 2, 2012 at 9:27 AM congrats Adeleke on a wonderful win for this excellent write luv.. poetic art ..

Kash Poet March 2, 2012 at 6:45 AM Congrats Adeleke!An excellent write from you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 2, 2012 at 5:48 AM Congratulations Adeleke xx

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2012 at 5:37 AM Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol