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A Pen In Paradise

I soared into the soothing skies, exploring its expanse with my eyes; and with my pen, just to paint paradise. (c) Adeleke Adeite. A twenty-word poem for Twenty/Twenty Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 8:01:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be outstanding Adeleke. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:56:00 PM
Nicely done, Adeleke. Creative and descriptive. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/8/2012 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win in PD contest..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2012 1:36:00 PM
A late congratulations on a well deserved win indeed! Very nice imagery. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:20:00 AM
ADELEKE,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:26:00 PM
congrats Adeleke on an awesome write and win.. super imagery fashioned to behold luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:03:00 PM
Congrats my friend. Michael
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Adeleke! Sorry so late...trying to catch up on all of the great contest wins. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/3/2012 10:51:00 AM
This made me smile, Adeleke-- yes writing sure can be paradise! Enjoyed your thoughts here, Super congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/3/2012 8:00:00 AM
Congrats, Adeleke. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win...Enjoyed reading this morn..Yes, we can go anywhere with our pen ..Sara
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:38:00 PM
wow, you did amazing with twenty words. A very well deserved win, Adeleke!! congrats.
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:57:00 PM
ADELEKE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 4:18:00 PM
Adeleke, awesome words, beautiful thought. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:02:00 AM
Yes we almost can't believe the beauty so we must record it! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:27:00 AM
congrats Adeleke on a wonderful win for this excellent write luv.. poetic art ..
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:45:00 AM
Congrats Adeleke!An excellent write from you.
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations Adeleke xx
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol
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