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A Pen, a Heart and Poetry

like leaves to a tree, like hives to a bee, like salt to the sea, like lock to a key, poetry to me is my legacy! when harsh words are said in pain tears are shed, happy hearts are wed, then broken and bled, in life’s history... poetry to me is my legacy. when eyes blur and flick, need a walking stick, moves no longer slick, eating is a trick, have a painful knee... poetry to me, is my legacy! a corner of room, a desk, chair and plume, when thoughts flow and bloom, from cradle to tomb.... agree? disagree? poetry to me, is my legacy! 1st placement Written 15/March/2021 Poetry as legacy Line Gauthier sponsored 27 lines, 5 syllables each line can be rearranged in to 19 lines by joining top 4 lines! first 6 lines followed by 3 sets of seven lines

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Date: 4/4/2021 2:58:00 PM
Krish, What a fun and clever write. Wonderful rhyme and wordplay. Thank you so much, Bryan
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/7/2021 3:38:00 PM
Bryan, Thanks! pleased you like it!:)
Date: 3/14/2021 9:34:00 AM
Krish, it's a beautiful poem. I love the line repeated - Poetry to me/is my legacy. It tells how passionate you are about poetry. I feel the same way too ~ mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/14/2021 10:38:00 AM
Mala thanks so much! I am glad you like it. I have tried a new format here, hope it works!
Date: 3/14/2021 1:43:00 AM
Yes so true... Poetry is a legacy and you have described it so beautifully... Reads like a winner...
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/14/2021 4:48:00 AM
Thanks Supraja! Nice to have you visit and comment! So pleased you like it!
Date: 3/14/2021 1:15:00 AM
Well written Krish, loved how this bounced along. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well, Have you retired yet.? Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/14/2021 4:46:00 AM
Hi Tom, thanks! Yes, I am good and leaving end of this month. may work lesser hours two more years as I am academically active. keeps the grey cells going!
Date: 3/14/2021 1:10:00 AM
This is wonderfully done, Krish:) I like the way you rhymed it and yes, poetry sure is a legacy:)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/14/2021 4:47:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I am grateful for your supportive words. So important to keep our writing spirits up!

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