A Pen, a Heart and Poetry

like leaves to a tree,
like hives to a bee,
like salt to the sea,
like lock to a key,
poetry to me
is my legacy!

when harsh words are said
in pain tears are shed,
happy hearts are wed,
then broken and bled,
in life’s history...
poetry to me
is my legacy.

when eyes blur and flick,
need a walking stick,
moves no longer slick,
eating is a trick,
have a painful knee...
poetry to me,
is my legacy!

a corner of room,
a desk, chair and plume,
when thoughts flow and bloom,
from cradle to tomb....
agree? disagree?
poetry to me,
is my legacy!

1st placement
Written 15/March/2021
Poetry as legacy
Line Gauthier sponsored
27 lines, 5 syllables each line
can be rearranged in to 19 lines by joining top 4 lines!
first 6 lines followed by 3 sets of seven lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Norton Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Krish, What a fun and clever write. Wonderful rhyme and wordplay. Thank you so much, Bryan
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Bryan, Thanks! pleased you like it!:)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Krish, it's a beautiful poem. I love the line repeated - Poetry to me/is my legacy. It tells how passionate you are about poetry. I feel the same way too ~ mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Mala thanks so much! I am glad you like it. I have tried a new format here, hope it works!
Kannan Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 1:43 AM
Yes so true... Poetry is a legacy and you have described it so beautifully... Reads like a winner...
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Thanks Supraja! Nice to have you visit and comment! So pleased you like it!
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 1:15 AM
Well written Krish, loved how this bounced along. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well, Have you retired yet.? Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Hi Tom, thanks! Yes, I am good and leaving end of this month. may work lesser hours two more years as I am academically active. keeps the grey cells going!
Daniel Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 1:10 AM
This is wonderfully done, Krish:) I like the way you rhymed it and yes, poetry sure is a legacy:)
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Thanks Jo, I am grateful for your supportive words. So important to keep our writing spirits up!
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