A Pearl

the bride a pearl on her forehead gleaming

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2013 3:10:00 PM

I am back to where i last left off. Love this one still!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2013 5:21:00 AM

Another good one!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 2/7/2013 2:37:00 PM

OOOOOOh, cool! Really enjoyed this. Charles, would you be willing to give a haiku I just posted a once-over? It's my first verb-less which I've ever attempted. It does have a metaphor and it isn't objective, but I have tried to make it just a tad more traditional. You can comment directly in the box and I'll reply to you there so that it is a teaching tool to others who are willing to give this a go. I just read a cool article today on verb-free haiku. Interesting! Hope you're well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2013 11:49:00 PM

I love how that last word can be for both!!!