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A Peaceful Flow

Sitting on top of a hill Inside me, I feel a peaceful flow As Valleys come alive down below My mind and heart one with the tempo! A gentle breeze that silently blows As times passes on some more The dusk creeps up from heavens door The night sky, with the stars so low The moon peeps out to say,Hello! The fires warmth seeping through That old song on the radio! A silent stream that slowly flows And floods your heart with a glow 23.5.2021 Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cook Contest: What brings you peace Third Place.

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Date: 5/23/2021 5:55:00 PM
Your poem paints a lovely peaceful picture, Carol! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/23/2021 8:24:00 PM
Thanks dear Kim.....much love and peace :)
Date: 5/22/2021 9:04:00 PM
So soothing!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 5/22/2021 9:39:00 PM
Thanks.....much love :)

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