A Peaceful Flow

Can't recall the last time if there ever was a time ~ where deep thoughts penetrated the lengths of my night pain always pulling throbbing me out of a dream no fantasy no steam no statisfaction of a lip licking need but there I was naked under cover of your watchful eye a most longingly eye "birds dipped their wings in the lucid flow of air" and the fire was burning near I touched your soul (it was warm) along with your heart as I inched deeper and deeper into your seams kisses were savoured you nibbled relentlessly upon my grace I felt your face etched in my mind and I smelled your skin not dripped with perfume but with love and eternal care I could not help but disappear again lost within your lair and as there I laid I drifted peacefully with the birds watching
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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Hello Tim, this poem is so beautifully written. As i read this poem i felt like i was floating in the air. have a nice day my friend.
Shines Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Just loved your poem.Have a great day!
Vaso Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 10:05 PM
What doesn't kill us makes us stronger...... or blinder.....
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:35 PM
- Wonderful poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Beautifully sensual and overflowing with love and desire. This is definitely the stuff dreams are made of and who cares if the birds are watching. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 10:20 PM
A lovely dream Tim. Poetic and romantic. Lovely! : )
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 6:45 PM
this creates such an interesting mood, Tim. It's akin to sublimity. (is that even a word?)
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