A Pause In Time

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Gazing up at the stars at night; Nature's beauty tends to awe you. You see ebony pierced by light; devoid of all traces of blue. And you feel small; amidst it all. Watching a shooting star take flight, you enjoy a breathtaking view. And savor a cosmic delight; that takes but a second or two. A pause in time; that feels sublime.

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David Crandall

Date: 3/5/2025 10:01:00 AM

Nice poem and rhyme scheme - I wish I could see a shooting star again, seems like I saw so many as a kid.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/5/2025 11:07:00 AM

Thanks, David, I appreciate your comments, my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/1/2025 11:00:00 AM

Hello Emile, I look up to the sky often. Sometimes i see the full moon with the stars. sometimes not. Yet I do not see the stars at all because the city lights dims them. My friend enjoy your day. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/1/2025 2:17:00 PM

Hello Emile, I hope you have a good weekend. You are welcome my friend. /Darlene

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2025 1:19:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate your comments, my friend, enjoy your weekend. Emile.