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A Pathway To the Road

A PATHWAY TO THE ROAD My neighbor made his own shovel and let me borrow it. My driveway looks like the precipice from which the Grinch sleighed down into Whoville! Perhaps an exaggeration, but I haven’t shoveled this much snow ever. I heard we usually get an average of two inches a year. The ruler measured eight from this one storm. a homemade shovel digs through snow and ice picketing hard work 12/11/2017

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Date: 12/11/2017 9:48:00 PM
Not sure what a haibun poem it, will have to look it up to better appreciate your poem. BTW, there is nothing to ponder about my poem about the "old man" hauling in his "catch of shadows." It's a metaphor for the evening sun going down./ M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 10:18:00 PM
Thank you! Very cool imagery!
Date: 12/11/2017 9:15:00 PM
Sounds like you got some work out Kim! Very nice haibun (and neighbor too!)~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 9:20:00 PM
I did! Got out in time to drive to my granddaughter’s party! Phew...
Date: 12/11/2017 4:13:00 PM
Great haibum story telling...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/11/2017 4:40:00 PM
Thanks, Silent! With my husband on business trip was quite the experience!!

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