A Path Un Traveled ( Part 3 )

Must I , FOREVER, swim amongst the “ DEATH “  in the River , Where  “ FOREVER “ is Just a 
DREAM
The AGONY is beyond what my minute “ HEART “  can accept , The Torment “SHINES“ in a 
Moonbeam
“DO not“  Watch this Moonbeam streaking across the Sky : Collecting Pieces of “Forever’s” 
Broken Heart
“Quilting - the Perfect “ LOVING HEART “ “Feeding it to the Devil Who savagely Rips and 
Tears it Apart

Author’s Note : Are YOU Bored : Yet!  I hope not as there could be 3 or 4 more parts to this  
SHOULD I  ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 5, 2010 at 5:01 AM
..........4.....so far, I'm into this poetic journey, as of three parts, i'm still followin--->
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October 13, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Answered u on your blog for more help HG luv.. don't get nervous.. its very easy.. will help u all I can..luv..
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October 13, 2010 at 8:05 PM
HG my silent beau ..have tackled your contest challenge luv.. good luck with your contest .. enjoy the great entries u will receive... your forever "Sweetheart" with luv..
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October 13, 2010 at 7:21 PM
My youngest, Eric Edward, is leaving tonight to fly back to Iraq so am on here for a short time tonight ...luv.. "Sweetheart"'
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October 13, 2010 at 7:20 PM
A great piece HG my silent beau.. if for the contest.. good luck luv... now if u have a digital camera take some photos of yourself... on that camera... then with the digital camera comes a wire ..plug the wire into the camera on proper end and into your computer with other end and the computer will walk u through loading the photos on it.. after that is completed luv.. then follow the directions I gave u on your blog luv.. it should work fine... sorry don't live close enough to help u in person
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October 13, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Daniel, deep and thoughtful enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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