A Path For Lovers

Beneath the glowing satellite, 
a path for lovers grew. 
So I set off and followed it 
in hopes to find love too. 

I wandered down meandrous roads 
that twisted and crisscrossed, 
but could not find love anywhere, 
that wayward feeling, lost. 

The light that once in music rose 
faded and suddenly 
bedimmed the tracks and hid the way, 
at least it did for me. 

What of the orb that's sung about 
mysterious and praised, 
if it can hardly shed or keep 
that light for lovers raised? 

Perhaps the moon drifts here and there 
as broken hearts will do, 
finding it hard to stay afloat 
because it's lonely too. 

I wonder if that mystic sphere 
will light the path and when 
or if in fact there really is 
a way to love again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/2/2009 5:03:00 PM
Congrats Celeste on your double feature this week. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 6/2/2009 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Great write!
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week and good luch. God bless you my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:00:00 AM
Celeste, Yes, there is a way to love again. Sometimes it takes a little time and a LOT of trust. Congratulations on having your poem, "A Path for Lovers" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane
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Date: 5/3/2009 12:00:00 PM
Nice work and good luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:12:00 PM
2nd of 3 "first round survivors" in the contest. Wow ... good for you, Celeste and good luck!!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your 3 poems making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Celeste. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:59:00 AM
your on my favorites list so i'll be checking in from time to time. once again , i'm glad i found you. john h loving iii
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Date: 3/1/2009 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. I really love this piece. It has great rhyme and flow, and the words speak right from the soul. So beautiful. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/27/2009 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2009 7:18:00 PM
Interesting perspective on love.. I've asked this question myself..Finding love is not easy and holding onto it is even harder but I have to believe that love is out there for everyone..Sometimes it can take many years before you find that special someone...Don't give up on it...I haven't..Just pray and be patient, God has the right person set aside just for you.~ Lovely write!!,God bless you and best wishes to you in finding love..Congratulations on this wonderful feature.*Tyesha
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:22:00 PM
Celeste - Had to double check even though i knew it was a different poem - Congrats on the double feature - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:30:00 AM
Hey!! Double feature!! Congratulations on "A Path for Lovers" being featured also. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/22/2009 10:22:00 PM
wonderfully written! lovely lines in there.. ~ Arany
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Date: 2/22/2009 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week.
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Date: 2/5/2009 5:37:00 PM
Celeste - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/5/2009 11:52:00 AM
Very good right. A joy to read. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:13:00 PM
Hi Celeste, I thought this was very poignant and beautiful; you captured well the search for love. Loved reading this and congrats :) on getting featured this week, it was well-deserved. Love, Amy :)
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 8:19:00 AM
Ah Love, that fickle master of our hearts, coming and going at will...Love does return and usually more splendid than the last. Lessons learned in the past ripen to wisdom the next time around. Yours will come to you in time as well. Congratulations on your feature! Keep dreaming! Trudy
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:30:00 AM
Being in love and staying happy in love isn't always that easy as you so wriote in this. The moon does help to guide through romance but a very obersing though about it possibly being lonely. The flow to this is great die to the perfect rhyme scheme. Excellent writing. Michael
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:49:00 AM
Hi Celeste, glad to see this one finally featured. Congratulations. Keep writing. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 1:54:00 PM
Yep, there is always a way to love ... beautiful writing here, Celeste ... reads like a song! and its a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:30:00 PM
Touching write. Hope you find what you look for. God Bless. Vince
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