A Path

A PATH 
I took a walk today 
Down a rocky path 
Without knowing 
All the obstacles ahead 
I kept walking 
With a steady pace 
I didn’t look back not once 
Leaving my past life 
Behind without any trace                                                                                        
The hills were steep 
But I kept climbing 
I had no other choice 
I had to move on 
Every step I made 
Seemed the rocks where 
Crumbling underneath my feet 
I kept my balance and struggled along 
The wind begin to blow 
Rustling the leaves around me 
Blowing debris in my path 
I closed my eyes 
And tried to overcome my fright 
I was losing my way 
How could I get back 
I hit my knees 
And said a prayer 
Lord help me find you 
I need you now more than ever 
I felt someone with me 
I was no longer alone 
He lifted me to my feet 
I closed my eyes 
The light was so bright 
The wind begin to stop blowing 
So I opened my eyes 
I was on a different path 
And no one was around 
But I could still feel him with me 
The ground ahead of me was flat 
So a begin to walk along 
The sun was shinning 
The wind was blowing 
A cool breeze upon my face 
The birds were chirping 
A sweet melody 
As a strolled along 
I could smell the sweet flowers 
And see the beauty of them all 
I was no longer blinded 
By the hate I had inside. 
This was a better path 
I was at peace 
And no longer running 
From the burden of my past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 6, 2016 at 9:11 AM
CHARLOTTE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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April 24, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Charlotte Cook, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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July 14, 2010 at 9:25 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Charlotte and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
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