A Passage To Madness

A Passage To Madness?




                          Radiant spirit embraces this bleeding heart
                          to extinguish the past

                          Old wounds afflicting my mind your tender
                          touch magically mended

                          Stars appear swaying in a serpentine dance
                          mesmerizing iridescent gems...



                          Amidst darkness you ignited like candlelight
                          exuded warmth and trust

                          Words expressed love energizing worn aging
                          flesh floundering unbounded

                          A kiss planted on mine from her ethereal lips
                          bestowed gifts and priceless dreams...



                          Might this be pure illusion or a divine reality?
                          Time travels while I ponder my mental acuity.









2:28 a.m.
2/18/2022
Lake Worth
Florida USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/21/2022 6:10:00 PM
Seeing the title, I thought something negative about to happen, but towards the end realize that it is slipping into a state f mad ecstasy ! Lovely penning Anselmo...
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/21/2022 6:54:00 PM
I really appreciate you Valsa! Sometimes when I'm in a state of melancholy I begin with gloomy lines, but then the mood suddenly changes then I end up writing something more upbeat. Go figure! Lol. Thanks again!!...ab
Date: 2/20/2022 7:55:00 PM
Highly recommended: Tap into your E.I. (Emotional Intelligence) -- The wetter the lips, the better the kiss, I say. Smiles, Gershon
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/21/2022 6:13:00 PM
Wet, wetter wettest! Smiley face smiling back...ab
Date: 2/20/2022 5:06:00 PM
Hi Anselmo, I realyy enjoyed reading this stunningly crafted poem. Your great metaphors and perfect wording shed more enchentment on this poem. from the first to the last verse, vibrant encouraging message could be read throughout.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/21/2022 6:17:00 PM
It always feels good when I can invoke thoughts that you can relate to. Thank you!...ab
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