A Part of Me

A part of me is dying
There is no point left in crying

Everything is wrong,
and my heart has been bonged.
Im left confused
not knowing what to do.

The world has lost its mind
And now a part of me 
dies cause you never noticed
me crying while i lie dying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 22, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Elizabeth. Love, Carol
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 10:13 PM
Elizabeth, I have a soft spot for this type of poetry and you did a wonderful job. I can feel the emotion flowing from it. Thanks for sharing it and congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week................S.Ronthorpe
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