A Park In My Neighbour

A regular walk to the park
My baby’s favourite landmark
Not more than half a mile away 
Where kids like to run and play

In the centre of the busy town
A place filled with giggling sound
Not only by little princes and angels
This place is liked by parents, as well, 

Rows of beautiful flowers
A big wide tree in the corner
The green grass covering the ground
Swings,slides and see-saws all around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/18/2008 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Jyoti on having your poem featured! Nicole
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on the re-feature. Vince
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Date: 8/18/2008 8:57:00 AM
Hi Jyoti! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. You deserve it. You have captured the beauty of the Park very well. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/18/2008 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations Jyoti on this delightful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured once again this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2008 3:32:00 PM
This certainly sounds like a beautiful park - thanks for sharing it with us through your poetry - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/6/2008 8:12:00 AM
Hi Sweet Love the imagery in this one! I felt like I was there with you and the easy flow of rghyme made this a wonderful and delightful read! Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/15/2008 2:10:00 PM
Hello~Jyoti congradulations on your featured poem. The park sounds like the place to be.
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Date: 6/10/2008 4:07:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to forward your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 7:33:00 AM
Great imagery. Congratulations on it being featured. Vince
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