A Park In My Neighbour

A regular walk to the park
My baby’s favourite landmark
Not more than half a mile away 
Where kids like to run and play

In the centre of the busy town
A place filled with giggling sound
Not only by little princes and angels
This place is liked by parents, as well, 

Rows of beautiful flowers
A big wide tree in the corner
The green grass covering the ground
Swings,slides and see-saws all around.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 18, 2008 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations Jyoti on having your poem featured! Nicole
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August 18, 2008 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on the re-feature. Vince
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August 18, 2008 at 8:57 AM
Hi Jyoti! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. You deserve it. You have captured the beauty of the Park very well. -Mohammad
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August 18, 2008 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations Jyoti on this delightful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
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August 18, 2008 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured once again this week. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 3:32 PM
This certainly sounds like a beautiful park - thanks for sharing it with us through your poetry - congrats on the feature
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July 6, 2008 at 8:12 AM
Hi Sweet Love the imagery in this one! I felt like I was there with you and the easy flow of rghyme made this a wonderful and delightful read! Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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June 15, 2008 at 2:10 PM
Hello~Jyoti congradulations on your featured poem. The park sounds like the place to be.
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June 10, 2008 at 4:07 PM
Nice use of rhyme to forward your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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June 10, 2008 at 7:33 AM
Great imagery. Congratulations on it being featured. Vince
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