A Park

Kids playing at the park
Sometimes until it is dark
Laughter around us
Which is a must
Warm breeze blowing
Thank goodness it's not snowing
The sun shining down
Which makes happiness around
Kind of relaxing to me
And makes me happy
A few shady spots
In case it gets hot
Lets go there everyday
That the days are not gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 11, 2010 at 8:05 PM
I have nothing good to say about this. Its childish without being charming and its meaningless without having a metaphor.
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