A PARENT'S LOVE

Mummy, which one do you love more,
Who’s your favourite one?
I think you’re fishing for compliments,
You know I love you all.
Yes, but who’s the best?

Well now, let me think …
Jemima’s best on the violin
And George excels on the piano.
Harry is good at poetry
But Fiona is better at prose.
Nobody catches Edward
When he runs the hundred metres
But when it comes to long jump,
Marys far ahead.
Petra got top marks for maths
And John is good at science.
Barbara’s great at cooking.
Theresa’s needlework’s fine.

There, I think I’ve covered everyone,
They’re all good in their way.
So I don’t have a favourite.

Er… Mummy, you’ve forgotten one,
You haven’t mentioned me.
Ah well, that’s an easy one.
You ask all the best questions!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 6, 2026 at 2:32 AM
Bryn, heartfelt congratulations on your contest win for this very well-crafted poem.
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September 5, 2026 at 5:45 PM
Bryn, wonderful job placing 11th out of 33 entries! Loved the unique take of everyone having their own "lovable" skill. A wonderful philosophical take.
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