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04/18/24

Poetic Expression 

Second place 

Contest by Silent One.

A Paradox of Juxtaposition


       Series of scattered suffused sufferings
         sprouting from shocks, stress and strain 
           appearing off and on in agitated brain
               sometimes igniting anger
                sometimes to lament or repent.
                 leading to diffused despondency.
                  reflexing complexity of perplexed mind.
                All disarranged disorganised 
             rather jumbled up creating  junk.
          How to assemble! ! Totally bewildered, confused.
      Juxtaposition in jugglery.
       
     Meaningless thoughts in hazard haphazard manner
       get crumpled, entangled, coiled turning surreal 
          fumbling voice of unimplemented wishes.
            Pointless feelings suffocating.
             Unfulfilled ambitions grumbling in vain.
              Trying to get rid of nuisances.
             Peculiar unthinkable happenstances 
           coming in dreams in streams.
          drifting on garage clearance 
       through nasty nightmare.
     May be Freudian slip of subconscious mind
  encompassed by smothered sensual feelings.

  All fuels are exhausted enfeebling  my venture..
     In last phase, it's only to ruminate over long past
        No energy left to plan for too short future.
           Most ridiculous even to think of past achievements,
              an those have turned obsolete.
                Failure - Success , Love - Betrayal, Happiness - Miseries
                   are jumbled swinging in juxtaposition.
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May 2, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations friend with a marvellous poem in this contest. Amazed by your juggling with words. Wish you a fulfilling journey in life.
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May 1, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Nice design of your poem.. written very well... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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