A Pale Maid

"this poem is not about what is written, 
but what is not written. . . " 

A pale maid in front of a lone bare tree stands looking at me. She seems so beautiful. Nature loves her; butterflies surround her, dancing in her hair. Staring at her there, I try to read those soulful eyes gazing back at my own. What secret could this solitary lass be silently expressing to me? Is she smiling? I can’t be sure. She is lovely but demure. Leaves from the stripped tree flit with the butterflies. The answers must lie in front of my eyes.
July 2, 2011 for Contest: "The Unwritten" A Double Etheree Inspired by and Dedicated to Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~
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Horsman Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:54 AM
wow i've found a beaut,, not read the comments Andrea,, but looking at you, i'd say you were looking in a mirror, you are indeed the beautiful one...
Ryerson Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Dearest Andie...Referring to your secret...what is the worst thing that could possibly happen?...Try to shug your shoulders and say 'So what?'... Let the Devil do his worst!...Let the worst happen...let it be so...I'm not giving you a lecture here...I often don't follow my own advise!... Your loyal and caring friend - Tm
Ball Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 6:59 PM
It's a rare gift to read between the lines. Nice job my friend. God Bless, JB
Babcock Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:39 PM
wow wow with this poem Andrea. Fantastic. love phyl
Scripca Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:25 AM
What a great Double Etheree you created here, dear Andrea! You are a wonderful poetess!!!
Scripca Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:24 AM
What a great Double Etheree you created here, dear Andrea! You are a wonderful poetess!!!
Villanueva Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 6:20 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! really fantastic penned art of mind is this...really makes me think and read beyond the lines_*junjun
Benson Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 9:33 AM
A fine epitome of poetry, you inspire me, Andrea. Well done.
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Im glad for your win with this elegant beautiful gem,i miss you sweet friend..tmfs!
Dailey Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 6:15 PM
I really liked this poem Andrea. Mike
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 6:32 AM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win with this dynamic write, Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 11:27 PM
Such a fantastic image created dear. Many congrats for this top win.
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 11:23 PM
Great offering here , lovely too. well done baby, blue, xo, Don
Ali Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 9:12 PM
It is there yet so much is hidden.... Congrats on this super win:)
Emelander Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 5:58 PM
Beautiful!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:38 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Andrea
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Oh sweetie so deep it was very strong you deserved this win Andrea.Thanks so much for your kind and nice words you gave on my win.Your congrats are a joy to me.LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:10 PM
love the mystery here,heratie.. well deserved top win.. whoot, huggs and congrats! ;)
Richards Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 1:00 PM
This was a favorite of mine as well! Congratulations, Andrea!!! Enjoy your honor so well deserved!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win with this dynamic write my friend.. luv it..
Deane Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Congrats on your win in Constance's contest, fantastic write
Sumler Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congrats on your win! Sounds like you walked into a fantasy expressed lovely using this rare form!
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:27 AM
I love this one, Andrea. Many congrats : )
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 10:14 AM
congratulations on your first place win i knew it was special
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