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A Pale Dawn

Pale dawn tiptoes in The fresh green blades frozen hard Icy wind cuts through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 3/31/2010 7:56:00 AM
I liked you haiku!! Good job!!! I can't wait to read some more of your poems!! Keep writing! -Courtney-
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:34:00 AM
very nice haiku loved it hope for contest if so good luck faleshia
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Date: 3/26/2010 8:32:00 AM
A very nice Haiku, I also think it is a winner. Thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 3/26/2010 6:51:00 AM
This is stellar in so many ways- One of the best I have seen
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Date: 3/26/2010 6:36:00 AM
Beautfully done. Im freezing now. BG
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