A Pale Dawn

Pale dawn tiptoes in
The fresh green blades frozen hard 
Icy wind cuts through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hallett Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:56 AM
I liked you haiku!! Good job!!! I can't wait to read some more of your poems!! Keep writing! -Courtney-
Murphy Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 9:34 AM
very nice haiku loved it hope for contest if so good luck faleshia
Muzzey Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 8:32 AM
A very nice Haiku, I also think it is a winner. Thank you for sharing. Caryl
White Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM
This is stellar in so many ways- One of the best I have seen
Gorelick Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Beautfully done. Im freezing now. BG
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