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Van Gogh Monoku Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Di11y Da11y. Date: 07/19/2023

A Pair of Shoes - Van Gogh

~ a sad, harsh transit ride through the vale of tears - weather-beaten old shoes ~
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George Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 9:43 PM
'A transit ride through the vale of tears'.... What a powerful metaphor ! Congratulations dear Edward on your great win.
Ibeh Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:13 AM
"Vale of tears" - Compelling writing. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 4:33 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Volumes Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Your Monoku is so apt for his painting and for his life. Exceptional perception Edward. A winner I am sure.
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you very much, SV:-)
Narain Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Nice
Ibeh Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Thank you, Jay:-)
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