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a pair of doves preen each other at summer's end.... an empty nest waits

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Date: 8/15/2017 4:34:00 AM
Your last line is strikingly meaningful rendering the haiku excellent ... By the way, thank you for my Quintain's placement ...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 7:22:00 AM
Probir, The last line could be taken several different ways and I think that you saw throught that..I appreciate the kind review and for your time spent here..Sara
Date: 8/14/2017 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, if humans could do the same thing would be a better place... Thank you, Sara, for my placement.. really honored to have been chosen dear friend..~*
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Date: 8/14/2017 5:37:00 PM
So much said in so few words--well executed Haiku Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 7:20:00 AM
Vijay, I appreciate the kind review of my work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 8/14/2017 6:38:00 AM
What an awesome poem. Lovely.
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Date: 8/14/2017 4:46:00 AM
Such a romantically natural write my friend! Full of nature and exquisitely penned to make me desire to see these birds nudge each other! I loved reading this illustrious poem this morning, what a remarkable piece Sara! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:26:00 AM
- Delightful haiku, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2017 7:49:00 PM
That is very sweet!!
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:59:00 PM
aww this is so charming Sara I love that final line and also the pic:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:20:00 PM
A love story... Straight to the point...Enjoyed it
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:17:00 PM
Very sweet Haiku Sara ! I enjoyed it :)
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