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A Pain In the Souffle

How come each morning when we greet the day The gunk in our eyes makes us say, “what the hey!” What good is this stuff Enough is enough Sometimes nature is a pain in the souffle

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Date: 4/11/2023 7:01:00 AM
When I wake up, all I have in my eyes is too much light:)Awakened by the morning sun, I roll over that side is done, finally get up,grab a quick cup, Grab my shades ready for fun. Good morning Jack:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2023 7:25:00 AM
Nature RULES!!! It's amazing that man exists at all... and a good morning to you my friend!!!
Date: 4/11/2023 5:36:00 AM
Prying open dry eyes is “so much fun” - a pain in the souffle!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/11/2023 5:52:00 AM
It's such a joy in the morn bumping into walls and stuff eh!!! Have a happy day Miss Kim! XOX

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