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A Pail and Shovel

A pail and shovel Bright red A castle to build A moat to fill Seagulls shriek Crabs scurry As tidal creep Threatens the kingdom

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/16/2023 6:43:00 PM

Ominous omens, indeed, Merlin. This calls for the geniosity of the Connecticut Yankee!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/16/2023 6:33:00 PM

I'm right there with a bucket and shovel and sand , lol

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/16/2023 3:48:00 PM

Ah, but there is no better protector of the kingdom than a shining knight with a red shovel and pail.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/16/2023 5:28:00 AM

Run! Nice, simple poem with meaning john

Tom Woody
Date: 8/16/2023 6:17:00 AM

But...I'm barefoot

John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2023 6:00:00 AM

sometime I don't know what I've written until I read it later. thanks for stopping by now go take the sand out of your shoe.