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A One-Way Journey

a dry maple leaf
sets sail into the unknown…
puddles rough with wind


25.05.2019
Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart

Copyright © Kurt Ravidas | Year Posted 2019

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May 27, 2019 at 9:49 PM

Beautiful image ,Kurt, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

May 27, 2019 at 9:43 AM

Kurt congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

May 27, 2019 at 1:07 PM

Thank your, DH. Best wishes to you and your contests)

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2019 at 2:59 PM

Your haiku is really well crafted, Kurt. I like it a lot. Congrats on the winner list.

May 27, 2019 at 1:08 PM

Thank you, Andrea)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2019 at 1:48 PM

- "A one-way journey"... it really is, great written Kurt - Congratulations with a 2nd place in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

May 27, 2019 at 1:08 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise)

Connie Marcum Wong

May 25, 2019 at 12:09 AM

I can feel autumn's chill in this colorful haiku. A wonderful haiku that belongs in the winner's circle Kurt! : )

May 27, 2019 at 1:09 PM

Thank you, Connie)

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