Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

- a One Way Ticket -

Hills come alive with sweet sounds of birds whistling tunes
Filled with harmonious peace, you sail within time
Gentle whispering winds through branches of trees call

When you dare to take the first step forward
Everything feels so easy embracing such beauty 
Mixing voices of nature talk deeply flowering 

Thrown into the unknown life is truly magical
A universe inside feelings explode in one gift
The soul eclipsing delight warmed with sunshine rays

Like a virgin being on guard of the tiger claws, lions, bears and snakes
Only when your starlight kisses clouds evaporate 
Time continues and the butterfly waltzes freely once more

Crossing paths in this journey new beginnings grow
Small wild strawberries threaded upon a stem beg to taste
Opening one gateway within thoughts 

Setting sail into another world beyond 
With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall
Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength

A cool breeze says goodbye upon your cheek
Loving spices land this boat on paradise sands where gold sparkles warm beams
When we meet at Heaven's gate batting lashes close entering a doorway into a dream 





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  05.09.2015 
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Kim Van Breda September 21, 2015 at 3:51 PM Stunning Liam ! Your pen flows with beautiful descriptions. "Setting sail into another world beyond With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength ...." Love that #7 ~~X~~

Dorian Petersen Potter September 13, 2015 at 2:44 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A very beautiful love poem collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2015 at 1:28 PM - CONGRATULATIONS ON OUR P.O.T.W., LIAM !!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 12, 2015 at 4:39 AM A harmonious and ecstatic poem of beauty! Excellent, dear Liam!

Dorian Petersen Potter September 11, 2015 at 2:14 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise !Another very beautiful romantic,captivating love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.A true gem! Excellent imagery!Just wonderful.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful romantic dreamy enchanting, sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just awesome!I love it!Great collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden.A 7 to each!A Fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 2:13 PM Your pens continue to flow with golden lines of beautiful imagery Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2015 at 12:47 PM - Always a pleasure to share words and thoughts with you dear Liam - I wish you a wonderful weekend .... relax and enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)