A On Line Moment

the album
fell apart,
pages scattered the floor-
just out of reach,
yesterday's... flickr
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Brown Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Natalie's "Talkin' Tech" contest Brian. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:49 AM
hey Brian, congrats on your win , David
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Brian-Cute! Congrats. on your HM in my contest :)
Mehta Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 5:55 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of natalie, Brian
Ramsdale Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Well done as usual my friend! Caryl Ramsdale
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Good one..If for one of the contest, reads like a winners' circle for sure..On what page is your latest contest displayed?..Thanks for selecting my work to place in your contest..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 1:08 AM
that's an ouchie, brian... love the imagery mood here!... winning;s best if for a contest..:) hugggs, nette
Culverhouse Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:13 AM
oh no....sounds bad!!
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