A Noteworthy Ship

for far too long now

he had bottled up his emotions

stuck reason to his wavelength

and built an intricate structure 

in the glass bottle of his mind


a real showpiece emerged

crafted by a master sail maker

a museum piece of an anchor however

and a bell that refused to ring

so tightly was the voyage enclosed


static it towered on a fire place surround

with other less prominent trinkets

a skinny laughing Buddha and some

Russian dolls mocking his very own

Potemkin villages and a bottle of Vodka


when the vessel hit rocks once more again

and descended into an underworld of passion

it crashed on a lighthouse in passing

and the beam of confusion burnt 

a hole in the glass shelter


disfigurement shone until the bottle

emerged from its molten ruins

in the shape of a lifebuoy


he had always thought that

one pull on the life line

which raised powerful trim

would adapt to winds and slackened lull

easily at the push of pure will


illusions in doldrums and thunder

storms fair weather and dolphins

rocking his boat taught him 

to swim on his own

search for sea shells and driftwood

and a hut on the beach


the best part about his construction

was that the old ship had never been

seaworthy and that trial and tested error

had been worth a passage of terror

now pacified and calm near the shoreline 


23rd October 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 3:58 AM
Whoa!! Very expressive and emotive work. I am glad that the boat finally was pacified and calm. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Liguori Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Enjoyable poem to read, thank you for sharing.
Neumann Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:50 PM
Thank you Robert. Just sailing with the currents ... kind wishes, Kai
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