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A Note To My Father

Dear God, This is me. Again. You took away my daddy 4 years ago. At that moment I can't understand why You took away someone so precious to me Someone who always be my first choice to talk Someone who always be my first choice to share my tears and laughter It took 4 years for me to know Your reason You did it, so I can realize, that I have You as my Father Someone who always hear my thought, even if I kept them in silence Someone who knew my sadness and joy before I tell So.. God.. Again, today, on my day.. I want to thank You..for the blessings.. For all painful experiences For the happiness after them And for always took me as Your child Even in times, when I forgot the fact That You always stay on my side. Oct 28th 2020 For my b'day

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Date: 7/12/2021 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... God the Father is the best Lover. God bless you.
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/12/2021 8:58:00 AM
Couldn't agree more.. JBU, Bea..thx for leaving trace on my page.. ~hug
Date: 10/28/2020 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully emotive poem.. My dad died ten years ago, but he was not much of a dad..
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