A Note To My Father

Dear God,

This is me. Again.
You took away my daddy 4 years ago.
At that moment I can't understand why
You took away someone so precious to me
Someone who always be my first choice to talk
Someone who always be my first choice to share my tears and laughter
It took 4 years for me to know Your reason
You did it, so I can realize, that I have You as my Father
Someone who always hear my thought, even if I kept them in silence
Someone who knew my sadness and joy before I tell
So.. God..
Again, today, on my day..
I want to thank You..for the blessings..
For all painful experiences 
For the happiness after them
And for always took me as Your child
Even in times, when I forgot the fact
That You always stay on my side.


Oct 28th 2020
For my b'day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/12/2021 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... God the Father is the best Lover. God bless you.
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:58:00 AM
Couldn't agree more.. JBU, Bea..thx for leaving trace on my page.. ~hug
Date: 10/28/2020 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully emotive poem.. My dad died ten years ago, but he was not much of a dad..
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