A Note To Mummy...

This is a note to mummy. 
To say, ‘thank you so very much’.
I will miss your sweet kindness,
And your soft, warm touch.

As you lie there in your bed, 
Smile as you read this,
Goodbyes are very hard, 
But cherish my one last kiss.

You were my everything, 
And, yes, you still are,
And when you are in heaven,
Hear my voice from afar. 

Thank you for all you’ve done for me,
For loving me so well,
No one, not anyone 
Can break our little spell. 

Our spell is cast on hope,
Trust and perfect love,
And when you see the lord,
May he greet you with his dove.

Oh, mummy, please don’t go.
Don’t let cancer take you, 
But if you really, really must,
I’ll say my final goodbye.

Daddy sends his love, 
Well, he would if he only knew,
But I was afraid to tell him, mum. 
After what he did to you…

So, as you lie there in your bed,
And as you slowly die,
In my prayers, you will always be,
For I am sure to cry…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/1/2011 12:39:00 PM
Sometimes it takes writes like this to relieve the pains. The Darkness can also be our light, and in time you will see green fields and colourful meadows, then the writing tablets will radiate with your words....:)
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Date: 2/10/2009 12:01:00 PM
a very upsetting poem to read, you really need to start to come out of the darkness and I wish you happiness in the future.
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