Julie Draper Poet Rhyme

A Note In the Wind

l saw a note in the wind 
caught up in the fencing 
could it possibly be...? 
was it what I was sensing?

determined to have it 
I gazed up admiringly 
it was out of my reach 
fluttering enticingly

I spied a big number too! 
I was feeling quite heady 
my mind was in overdrive 
I had spent it already 

so it pains me to say
I was terribly mistaken 
instead of cash I retrieved 
a parking citation

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Sam Kauffman October 28, 2022 at 1:29 PM Rats! Pure hope dashed! Wonderful build up to your conclusion. Hope the ticket wasn't too expensive! All the best especially for a good, unticketed parking place! Julie Draper October 28, 2022 at 4:42 PM Haha! thanks Sam, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it :)