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A Note In the Wind

l saw a note in the wind caught up in the fencing could it possibly be...? was it what I was sensing? determined to have it I gazed up admiringly it was out of my reach fluttering enticingly I spied a big number too! I was feeling quite heady my mind was in overdrive I had spent it already so it pains me to say I was terribly mistaken instead of cash I retrieved a parking citation

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Date: 10/28/2022 1:29:00 PM
Rats! Pure hope dashed! Wonderful build up to your conclusion. Hope the ticket wasn't too expensive! All the best especially for a good, unticketed parking place!
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/28/2022 4:42:00 PM
Haha! thanks Sam, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it :)

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