A Note In the Wind

If I could write or had the words,
There is a lot I want to say,
But I’m only three.
You know I love you, mommy,
So much I wish I was bigger
To protect you when daddy gets mad.
I love daddy, too, 
but I have to close my eyes
so I can’t see him hit you.
I can’t bare to see you cry
And I don’t know why or how
To make it stop.
I’m helpless, mommy,
And I think you and daddy
Still love each other, you just can’t show it
And I need to see love or I’ll wither
And grow bitter and angry
And not be able to show my love, either.
I want to be a flower, mommy
To grow strong but gentle,
Open arms to my sun.
You, mommy, are my sun,
My light, my everything,
and if only I could write,
I’d give this note to the wind
And hope someone will help me.

10/25/22

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/15/2024 3:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about a sad reality, through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/17/2023 10:51:00 AM
This hurts, sigh, really made me tear up as i read your words, so raw and soul hitting, exactly what a child would feel in such a situation.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/19/2023 4:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind remarks.
Date: 11/2/2022 4:49:00 AM
Great write, Phil. A surprise ending that can put a tear in the hardest souls' eyes. Congratulations on your winning placement. Charlie
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Phil Capitano
Date: 11/7/2022 4:26:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, good to know you got the message and felt the sadness.
Date: 10/25/2022 5:58:00 PM
Heartbreaking…and touching. Kids can naturally love their parent whether good or not. If only the wind would carry his note and solve the trouble.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/26/2022 4:32:00 AM
Yes, they are so innocent and need protecting. If only someone could hear the wind...
Date: 10/25/2022 10:28:00 AM
Very good.
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