A Note In the Wind

If I could write or had the words,
There is a lot I want to say,
But I’m only three.
You know I love you, mommy,
So much I wish I was bigger
To protect you when daddy gets mad.
I love daddy, too, 
but I have to close my eyes
so I can’t see him hit you.
I can’t bare to see you cry
And I don’t know why or how
To make it stop.
I’m helpless, mommy,
And I think you and daddy
Still love each other, you just can’t show it
And I need to see love or I’ll wither
And grow bitter and angry
And not be able to show my love, either.
I want to be a flower, mommy
To grow strong but gentle,
Open arms to my sun.
You, mommy, are my sun,
My light, my everything,
and if only I could write,
I’d give this note to the wind
And hope someone will help me.

10/25/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 3:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about a sad reality, through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Empress Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 10:51 AM
This hurts, sigh, really made me tear up as i read your words, so raw and soul hitting, exactly what a child would feel in such a situation.
Capitano Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 4:56 AM
Thank you for your kind remarks.
Messina Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 4:49 AM
Great write, Phil. A surprise ending that can put a tear in the hardest souls' eyes. Congratulations on your winning placement. Charlie
Capitano Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Thanks Charlie, good to know you got the message and felt the sadness.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 5:58 PM
Heartbreaking…and touching. Kids can naturally love their parent whether good or not. If only the wind would carry his note and solve the trouble.
Capitano Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 4:32 AM
Yes, they are so innocent and need protecting. If only someone could hear the wind...
Pachecho Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Very good.
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