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A Noble and a Traveler

From some other time, from some other race I’ve stopped for a visit, from some other place A sovereign soul, I retain still a trace Of all other places I’ve been to in space I’ll stay ‘til I’m tired and learn what I must Then move on with joy to my home in grace My clothes are my body, it will fall of in dust It’s only borrowed, yet a great sacred trust Genetics of my parents, my soul, my own And I owe them greatly for their selfless loan It serves for the moment, and offers a ride To view my creation, I produced from inside I’ve passed through the curtain to appear once again On the stage of the theatre with all of my friends I’ll learn from them and they’ll learn from me Interchanging our roles, growing eternally I retain all the best features that I ever had With the help of my friends, to these I will add I’ll wash out my vices, my lusts and my sin And learn from the voice of my master within He hears all my wishes, provides all my needs He gives me the answers and governs my deeds He is my silent teacher, the voice of the soul Pushing me relentlessly toward my goal I’ve been here many times, each time playing the role That I most needed then, for the growth of my soul In the fourth generation I’ll appear once again With a plan for perfection and a lifetime to spend Seeking final completion of an eons long quest To reach the last level in the alchemical test Until finally perfect, no need to return No problems to solve, no lessons to learn Then I can rest, my journey complete Perfected and purified in my creators seat Then through other dimensions in steps not yet trod I will finally arrive to reunion with God I chose this experience and I wrote the play I chose the actors I perform with today It has been what I’ve made it, none other to blame I’m a noble and a traveler, in life’s wonderful game.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/6/2014 12:19:00 AM
Vic... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 10/26/2013 2:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:46:00 PM
Vic, interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3 .
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:36:00 PM
Hi Vic. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:19:00 AM
A very deeply philosophical and scientific mixture of life cycles. Favorite line, "I’ll wash out my vices, my lusts and my sin And learn from the voice of my master within".. Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/20/2013 10:35:00 AM
Wonderfully done and congrats on the contest.
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Date: 10/18/2013 10:28:00 AM
Amen! Congratulations.
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Date: 10/18/2013 4:53:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win in the contest,Vic
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thanks very much for entering my contest. This is wonderful work personifying science, it digs deep into the way science works inside a person. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:21:00 PM
This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:58:00 PM
Hi VIc, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:13:00 AM
very interesting poem you have crafted here...enjoyed the read, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on winning the place in the contest, Vic
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Dr Metha I don't know which contest you mean Can you tell me? Vic Pister
Date: 9/2/2013 5:35:00 PM
Re-incarnation? I have my misgivings about it and have written so. Nevertheless, your poem brings forth some interesting ideas worth thinking about. Thanks. Allan
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Date: 8/11/2013 3:00:00 AM
Hi Vic, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 8/10/2013 2:38:00 PM
Hello new member Vic !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/10/2013 11:03:00 AM
hello Vic thank you for introducing the life and journey you love. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@....
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