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Just a horrific dream, thank God! Some memories of childhood have grown dim,

but not the memory of this one nightmare.

A Nightmare With Long-Lasting Effects

In my worst, most surreal childhood nightmare, my little sister and I
were playing near a rain-swollen creek, in which—in a flash--she floated 
facedown, drowned. Then, already paralyzed, I was attacked by hundreds 
of loud, vengeful whippoorwills.

Even now a sound sweet to others is haunting to me~~whip poor will.
38 words, 17 syllables Date: June 28, 2020 entered in A Memory Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Neumann Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 3:57 AM
I am glad that it was ‘just’ a dream.
Canerdy Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:54 AM
YES! Thanks, Kai. Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:31 PM
A tragedy like that one can never forget--a nightmare that haunts. A story well told, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Thank God it was only a dream! Thanks, Vijay. Janice
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