A Nightmare

pale moon rises in vermilion skies
ashes and screams erupt from the pyre
lusterless eyes beseech me to join their throng
lifeless hands stretch forth from the fire
imploring me to cast off my innocence
daylight rips me from the delusion ~  pallid and afraid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 11:14 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Patricia. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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September 12, 2009 at 8:48 AM
great piece, creatively penned... I love the flow of words. keep writing. Adeleke
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September 12, 2009 at 8:31 AM
As one who has endured nightmares since childhood, I can really relate to this poem, Patricia. Indeed, there are times when I wake up "pallid and afraid." Awesome use of the acrostic form! Love, Carolyn
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