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A Nightmare

pale moon rises in vermilion skies ashes and screams erupt from the pyre lusterless eyes beseech me to join their throng lifeless hands stretch forth from the fire imploring me to cast off my innocence daylight rips me from the delusion ~ pallid and afraid

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Date: 9/13/2009 11:14:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Patricia. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:48:00 AM
great piece, creatively penned... I love the flow of words. keep writing. Adeleke
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:31:00 AM
As one who has endured nightmares since childhood, I can really relate to this poem, Patricia. Indeed, there are times when I wake up "pallid and afraid." Awesome use of the acrostic form! Love, Carolyn
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