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A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory

A nightingale sings at dawn’s glory. Oh! Exquisite is the sound I am hearing. Breathtakingly beautiful is Sun’s glow. On his subjects below Sun is peering. As he beams down on us from a sky painted pink, a nightingale sings at dawn’s glory. Oh, I feel like old Sun just gave me a wink! And what do I see in front of me? Lo! In the meadow I stand in there is a young doe - perfection which stares at me with soft eyes. A nightingale sings at dawn’s glory. Oh! Breeze touches my cheeks. So sweetly she sighs. More birds join in now. It’s like a choir. Magic at daybreak all creatures can know! As Sun in Heaven climbs higher and higher, a nightingale sings at dawn’s glory. Oh! May 23, 2021 for Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 3 Poetry Contest Title chosen: "A Nightingale Sings of Dawn's Glory" For Brian Strand's the 'ALL YOURS (Jun 23)' Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/24/2021 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful morning meadow song and picture my friend! Brings back memories! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:42:00 AM
I had already commented on it. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 10:51:00 PM
One can almost hear the choir, and feel the dawn breaking, congrats for a win
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Date: 6/18/2021 11:57:00 AM
A wonderful poem with really creative rhymes, Andrea:-) It has an amazing flow to it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 6/18/2021 10:58:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 6/18/2021 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:20:00 AM
One would never get tired of a Nightingale song... so many beautiful imagery and I love the magic at daybreak... Hugs my friend... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:25:00 AM
Yours is brilliantly beautiful, Andrea, I would love it if you stopped by mine:)
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Date: 5/24/2021 8:17:00 PM
A lovely poem on the melody of a bird song Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:27:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, This is a good, well-written write. So fitting for the title your chose.Best wish in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:30:00 AM
I hear the sound of glory--beautifully painted scene, Andrea.
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:30:00 AM
Oh! Exquisite!
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Date: 5/24/2021 2:00:00 AM
Seems the nightingale is so magical in its singing that it draws other birds to join in a chorus. Beautiful.
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Date: 5/23/2021 9:40:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... I would love to hear a nightingale sing. Your poem puts the spirit of summer into the soul - nicely written Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:16:00 PM
My friend, your verses paint such an uplifting and wonderful picture of life, peace, serenity, Beauty and Nature! A definite fav for me-- and truly a very inspiring new creation! God bless...
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:36:00 PM
A wonderful quatern, Andrea. Every time I start to write one, it turns into a pantoum or a villanelle. Strange! You have done such a marvelous job with it. Nice writing with a beautiful theme and rhymes.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2021 3:41:00 PM
thanks, I love this form. I feel it works really well when we are given a particular "line" to inspire and when that line is really cool, like this one Edward gave us. (had to tack the OH on the end though for good rhymes)
Date: 5/23/2021 4:34:00 PM
what a charming poem i dont think i have written this form often, i really should try:-) hugs jan xx
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