A Night To Remember

So sweet a kiss
The murmuring tunes of Spring
In the fragrant breath of night
Hums within my slumbering ears.
Like the whispering trees dancing
In the softest dews descending
From the vapours of the skies 
When the soothing night
Was young with the glimmering moon of May.

The poor labouring clouds expanded wide
In the muted distance ripe with coldness
While the storming of the Eastern wind
Drifted through the blossoming fields
Graced by the sultry springs in the lulling hours.
I pulled the weary drapes
When the night grew old with silence
From a crystal window 
Mirrored against the dumb fields
Black with the night.
A soft mist exudes the dead wind
Curled around the nodding branches.
Then I stealed away to the vacant spot
Where a crackling fire
Invaded the mournful breath of silence.

Lipsing sounds intrudes the night
Upon the quiet slopes and verdant span
Where the blossoms gently bow
Kissing soft the silver spray
Fluttering in the starry distance.
There sauntered I
Under the gladsome sky
To pluck a cherry from its stem
Outstretched beneath the sobbing moon
That in the dawning misty hours
That silver orb of light expires
When the sun had greet the day
With a golden sigh!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/2/2014 6:29:00 AM
- Thank you for sharing this beautiful and romantic poem - Glad I chose to read this today (7!!!!) - Have a nice Sunday, Mustapha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:14:00 PM
M, I love the imagery you gave within this poem...this truly a romantic and magical kind of poem..thank you for sharing... :)
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Date: 9/1/2013 11:29:00 PM
I do love this romance so. The images just come alive ;} thank you for reading my words ;}
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Date: 9/1/2013 4:50:00 PM
Your poems are so descriptive that the reader does not have to try hard to see the imagery we are meant to see. Amazingly beautiful poetry! Thank you for all of the encouraging comments on my work. I appreciate it very much! I really like your poems, as well.
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Date: 8/31/2013 8:11:00 PM
Wow this is awesome and so romantic grate write!Keep it up!
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Date: 8/31/2013 10:00:00 AM
very settle to the mind with a night to remember leaves such glorious scenes and everything seems more vivid to the mind, with great love and ~always, Linda
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Date: 8/31/2013 6:35:00 AM
This has an old world magical feel to it. Great work!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 9/1/2013 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Richard for your lovely review.
Date: 8/31/2013 1:04:00 AM
Expressive nature dude !
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/31/2013 4:15:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your kind thoughts.
Date: 8/30/2013 10:40:00 PM
I want to know this place, I feel like I know this place the way how you describe it, its enchanting warm, peaceful, happy thats the feeling it gives ~<3~ love your thoughts M. Cherie
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/31/2013 4:16:00 AM
Thank you Cherie. I will take you there someday.
Date: 8/30/2013 7:33:00 PM
The picture, a lovely picture expands clearly by the imageries
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/31/2013 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram. Appreciate all your recent reviews. They are uplifting.
Date: 8/30/2013 5:30:00 PM
Very descriptive work about the night sky..Enjoyed reading it this eve..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/31/2013 4:14:00 AM
Thank you Sara .
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