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A Night to Remember (1958)

A Night to Remember

In chambers of memory, a great vessel rides,
Not steel, nor steam, but spectral, she presides.
A gilded cage, a promise bravely sold,
In every polished plank, a story is foretold.
She is a fragile vase of human grace and pride,
On dark and silent seas, where our illusions hide.
Each passenger, a hope, a fear, a dream in tow,
A gallery of souls, the high and the low.

The Captain is a hand upon the clock’s cold face,
Demanding speed, though time runs out of space.
The rich man is a vault, his wealth a heavy key,
Ignoring the deep warnings of the coming sea.
The third-class stoker, just a single, vital breath,
Unseen, unheard, the engine of life and death.
The iceberg is the Truth, inevitable and vast,
The quiet, crushing weight of choices in the past.

It does not hate, it simply is, a fact so stark and cold,
That shatters the fragile myths the builders had been told.
The moment of the strike, a tremor, then a sound,
The crack of certainty, where no fault was found.
The decks become a stage, a drama stark and clear,
As the ship of our conceit is conquered by our fear.
The band plays on—denial’s lovely, fading tune,
A brave, sweet song beneath a pitiless, dark moon.

Lifeboats, opportunities, are launched with space to spare,
A cruel economy of panic and despair.
And as the bow descends, a final, gasping plea,
The vase is tipped, the waters rush in free.
The decks go vertical, the social order breaks,
The cold, black water claims what the deep ocean takes.
The metaphor goes down, a legend to the core,
A night the soul remembers, forevermore.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:38 PM
truly love your poetic voice. These lines left me in awe: in every polished plank, a story is foretold. She is a fragile vase of human grace and pride, On dark and silent seas, where our illusions hide. Each passenger, a hope, a fear, a dream in tow Perfectly executed poem, William
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:51 PM
A poignant truth realized, to have contemplated lifeboats for the affluent first-class female passengers, the destitute/steerage passengers had a destiny with death before it left the dock, even if it had not struck the iceberg, their lives hung in the balance.
Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:19 PM
This is a final product as evolved from much time considering, tweaking and committing to your desire to execute as perfectly as possible something you enjoyed writing into condensed perfection. I'm sure you thrived while composing this impressive poem. I enjoyed the read very much and I'm glad you put your efforts into its creation.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:45 PM
A general analysis that appears to express enjoyment and admiration for the work and dedication, of which I am truly grateful.
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