Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- a Night Sky -

A magical moment - a magical evening hours 
                          Mysterious melody captivates you          
                          On the grass blinks drops 
                          of the rain that has been 
                          Listening to nature's melody 
                          Today's color and light fades 
                          As a shining jewelery 
                          moon comes forth from the clouds 
                          A night sky is colored red orange in the west
                          A blush on her cheeks when her
                          lover whispering sweet words in her ear
                          The night quietly and gently steals 
                          light and color for a little while 
                          But the melody is still there 
                          it fills me with confidence 
                          that nature really live 
                          The night ... perfumed
                          with a blissful intoxication of familiarity
                          No words - just admiration and wonder 
                          Night Jewels - life and creative power 
                          The melody - never disappears - but will change 
                          As heavenly beautiful tones 
                          promises eternal peace and love





27.03.2014
A-L Andresen :)



Contest Name:	A NIGHT SKY 
Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
Deadline	4/18/2014 

(6th in the contest)

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Deborah Shiells May 8, 2014 at 6:28 PM Hi Anne Lise, What a dreamy write. So Beautiful~ Thanks so much for sharing this write with us here. Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2014 at 12:27 PM - Deborah, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak April 3, 2014 at 7:49 AM This has a surreal beauty. Your amazing images will linger in the mind like memories of star-lit nights Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:46 PM - Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Monterey - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock April 2, 2014 at 10:01 PM Congratulations on your win on this wonderful descriptive write. Anne Lise. Awesome. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:29 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2014 at 5:45 PM Anne, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:28 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath April 2, 2014 at 1:05 PM Oh! my lovely friend, it's a magical poem of magical adoration of changing colors in night sky promises eternal peace and love with the blissful silent melodious intoxication on the captivating night's Nature. Tremendous beauty adorned with magical colorful words. Congrats, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 1:15 PM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, my friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A April 2, 2014 at 12:21 AM ANNE:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~ Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:19 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler April 1, 2014 at 8:33 PM I really loved the way you described the sights and sounds of the night. A very beautiful and creative write, Anne Lise. Congratulations on your win, as well! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:18 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olusegun Arowolo April 1, 2014 at 5:44 PM lovely and wonderful piece of work,Anne... congrats on your win..It is well deserved... Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:17 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting, Olusegun. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2014 at 2:12 PM this is truly magical as your heart's sky, anne... how gentle is a night of love ad peace-- fantastic!.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:16 AM - Thanks for my win, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

D.W. Rodgers April 1, 2014 at 7:54 AM Truly evoke the beauty of a quiet evening fading into night. Congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2014 at 7:56 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting Dave. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2014 at 1:06 AM Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2014 at 3:13 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 31, 2014 at 5:05 PM Congrats on a fine win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2014 at 3:12 AM - Thanks for visiting - and greeting Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson March 30, 2014 at 11:44 AM Hi Anne Lise I love the beautiful imagery in your poem. Best wishes Linda x Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2014 at 12:37 PM - Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Linda - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 29, 2014 at 3:41 PM Dear Anne Lise, This is such a creative interpretation of the evening sky's beauty. I especially love the last two lines. Who could ask for more than eternal peace and love? Wonderful, dear! Love, carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 4:03 PM - Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Carolyn - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery March 29, 2014 at 2:44 PM Such a beautiful and all sense(s) awakening poem Anne Lise. As it is your inner sense of wonder and appreciation of detail that is the essence of such beauty. Thank you for reading Psalms 71:8. Psalms 71 is so powerful. Take care as God does Bless. Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 4:02 PM - Vincent, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll March 29, 2014 at 12:45 PM Stopping by to wish you a blessed weekend Anne! Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 1:40 PM - Hope your weekend will be springlike and beautiful,Ken my friend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt March 29, 2014 at 10:44 AM A Masterpiece Anne!!! Faving it! Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 11:52 AM - So glad you liked my poem - Thanks for visiting and honored that you fav. it, thank you Keith ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2014 at 5:33 PM Reads like a winner in Nette's contest..Night skies are a beauty all their own..Enjoyed reading your great description of them..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 9:20 AM - Sara, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn March 28, 2014 at 2:39 PM Another beautiful jewel in the crown of your poetic style it is truly a gift to write about nature the way you do, it's a sweet softness within your lines that captures the readers and takes them on the jouney with you. Great job lady, Glad you enjoyed my Gables also loved writing something different even if it was a rewrite. cheri Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 4:36 PM - Glad you like my poem, Cherl :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mel Merrill March 28, 2014 at 11:27 AM I enjoyed this and your other poems. Night is a tour de force--a pleasant tour of lavish imagery and worthwhile sentiments. I look forward to reading more! Peace. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 1:23 PM - Always nice with visit and comments on the poems I post here - thanks Mel :)- You're welcome back when you want it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda March 28, 2014 at 10:48 AM What a supremely serene poem. I felt all the burdens of the day lifting as I read it. Beautiful words by a beautiful soul. Xx~Xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 1:26 PM - Kim, glad you like my poem :) - thanks for the lovely words - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 28, 2014 at 8:59 AM A symphony of expressions culminating in rapturing beauty! Good Luck my dear Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 1:21 PM - Thank you for visiting my poem "A Night Sky", Demetrios - glad you liked it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker March 27, 2014 at 10:20 PM This poem brought peace to my spirit, may you do well in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 2:33 AM - I am glad that my poem gave you peace to your spirit..... - Then I have achieved something positive with my words. - Thank you, Frederic :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn March 27, 2014 at 9:46 PM Oh what beauty lies in the night and in your wondrous write, bravo dearest lady nature herself bows to your captivatiy words describing the night. cheri Also i need your help on comment to a poem i just posted please if you would check out one i called the gables. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 2:29 AM   - Thanks for the nice comments and visit,Cherl - I will come and read your new poem - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell March 27, 2014 at 9:20 PM You captured the magic of the moment, Anne-Lise! Awesome write of our heavenly universe presented in illuminating jeweled sky. Beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 2:27 AM   -Toquyen, really nice with visit and your beautiful words - Thank you :) - Love your new photo! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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