A Night On the Town

A night on the town... Lightning 
struck, Lit up the skyline beautiful 
sight. Rain pouring down, Land 
wet... Lake michigan and the collide 
of joined hands in this rain dance. 
Coconut Ciroc and juices flowing, 
the mental great exchange of 
energy...lyrical mastermind spit his 
culture right next to me. Bathed in 
amazement and off to the next 
event... Celebration of this cerebral 
******* changed flatz to heels and 
soul music to our amusement. Held 
pool sticks and focused... Daddy 
show me how u get down!!! Frankie 
Beverly and stepping repping the 
Chitown. A NIGHT ON THE TOWN... 
Rain pouring dont wanna(5/6) 
escape... Electric transactions and is 
this way u love me baby! Lasting 
impression from dust to dawn and 
we both vibrate like King & Queen... 
Stumbled to my doorway itz time to 
end this thing Dreaming... And I am 
blessed drowning in your essence, a 
beautiful manifestation of us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/29/2014 12:36:00 PM
You paint a lovely picture
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Date: 2/3/2014 2:14:00 PM
This is hot, simply hot, and filled with explosive hunger, love hunger, life hunger, and the closing is superb: " I am blessed drowning in your essence, a beautiful manifestation of us"—Bravo, Poet!
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Danielle Lewis
Date: 2/3/2014 2:22:00 PM
I am very honored from one poet to another, thanks times infinity. I'll be trying my best to get more to u all soon! Love always ~Starr
Date: 2/3/2014 2:05:00 PM
Awesome write...where have you been? Come back and post more!!
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Danielle Lewis
Date: 2/3/2014 2:20:00 PM
Thank u script... I know it's been awhile! Big transitions in my life but the pot is still cooking up good soup for the soul... Coming soon! Very humbled and honored you still think I got it!!!
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