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A Night of Fireworks

It was summer, I was seventeen, as I held your hand Bubble gum sweet kisses as we sat waiting for the show People all around, eating hot dogs, enjoying the band Delighted we are now a couple for the world to know Bubble gum sweet kisses as we sat waiting for the show Loud Smoky bangs as the sky lit up with red, white and blue Delighted we are now a couple for the world to know We enjoyed the show as I felt my own fireworks for you Loud smoky bangs as the sky lit up with red, white and blue People all around, eating hot dogs, enjoying the band We enjoyed the show as I felt my own fireworks for you It was summer, I was seventeen, as I held your hand 12/31/2020 Contest: Fireworks Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 2/5/2021 11:48:00 PM
Thank you for participating and winning in Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Tania, everything I was looking for. Hugs Eve
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/6/2021 3:19:00 AM
Thank you Eve! hugs
Date: 2/4/2021 1:49:00 PM
The delight of youth! Congratulations, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 1/1/2021 10:35:00 AM
Wow Tania! That was terrific! That surely brought back some memories for me. I loved the "bubble gum kisses"
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/1/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Mark! :)
Date: 1/1/2021 7:52:00 AM
Wonderful memories of a first love, Tania. You will never forget them; they are now a part of you that makes you special. Best wishes for the new year, Carolyn
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/1/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2020 12:11:00 PM
aww absolutely charming Tania, good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan Happy new year my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/31/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Happy New Year to you as well! Hugs
Date: 12/31/2020 10:01:00 AM
Well written pantoum Tania, happy memories. Good luck in the contest and happy new year. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/31/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Tom, Happy New Year to you! :)
Date: 12/31/2020 9:23:00 AM
Your pantoum is well constructed. Best for a win. Happy New Year. ~~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/31/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Victor, it's a bit nostalgic! Happy New Year! :)
Date: 12/31/2020 4:41:00 AM
Love this, Tania! So well done!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/31/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Kim, Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2020 4:38:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love it :) I hope you're a winner. God B L E S S you with a wonderful New Year
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/31/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thank you Gina, Happy New Year to you!