A Night I Regret

A night I will never forget
And I will forever regret.
One cold and lonely night
That was never made right.

Sitting under a giant tree
Talking, just you and me.
You were acting so strange,
I knew something's change.

This is no longer working;
Is it true what I'm hearing?
What was I supposed to say
So that I can make you stay.

I am not easy I must admit;
I've always tested your limit.
Made things complicated,
Leaving you so exhausted.

Things hadn't been perfect,
But this, I never did expect.
Stared at you without a word,
As my vision became blurred.

You stood up after a while
And I forced myself to smile.
Tried so hard to hide my pain;
Tears I made myself contain.

Then you turned your back
And I wanted to call you back;
But my pride wouldn't let me
Within me I just kept my plea.

That very night I let you go
Eventhough I still love you so.
A night I will forever regret
And will never ever forget.



*For the 'REGRETS' contest.
*Written February 11, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 19, 2013 at 4:09 PM
Grushen, congratulations with your wonderful win..Linda
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February 18, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Grushen! Annalise
Guazon Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Thank you very much!!! :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 3:40 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Guazon Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:49 AM
Thank you so much. :)
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February 12, 2013 at 2:31 AM
HEY GRESHEN THANKS FOR THE COMMENT ON MY VERY FIRST POEM I EVER WRITTEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE...I JUST GOT MY MOJO FOR BEING SAD FOR A LOVE THAT CAN NEVER OCCUR BETWEEN US...IT'S A TRUE STORY OF MINE IN A HOTEL RECENTLY
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February 12, 2013 at 11:27 AM
No problem. It was truly beautiful. :)
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