A Night I Regret

A night I will never forget
And I will forever regret.
One cold and lonely night
That was never made right.

Sitting under a giant tree
Talking, just you and me.
You were acting so strange,
I knew something's change.

This is no longer working;
Is it true what I'm hearing?
What was I supposed to say
So that I can make you stay.

I am not easy I must admit;
I've always tested your limit.
Made things complicated,
Leaving you so exhausted.

Things hadn't been perfect,
But this, I never did expect.
Stared at you without a word,
As my vision became blurred.

You stood up after a while
And I forced myself to smile.
Tried so hard to hide my pain;
Tears I made myself contain.

Then you turned your back
And I wanted to call you back;
But my pride wouldn't let me
Within me I just kept my plea.

That very night I let you go
Eventhough I still love you so.
A night I will forever regret
And will never ever forget.



*For the 'REGRETS' contest.
*Written February 11, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/19/2013 4:09:00 PM
Grushen, congratulations with your wonderful win..Linda
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Grushen! Annalise
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/19/2013 4:51:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! :)
Date: 2/18/2013 3:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/19/2013 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/12/2013 2:31:00 AM
HEY GRESHEN THANKS FOR THE COMMENT ON MY VERY FIRST POEM I EVER WRITTEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE...I JUST GOT MY MOJO FOR BEING SAD FOR A LOVE THAT CAN NEVER OCCUR BETWEEN US...IT'S A TRUE STORY OF MINE IN A HOTEL RECENTLY
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/12/2013 11:27:00 AM
No problem. It was truly beautiful. :)
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