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A Night I Regret

A night I will never forget And I will forever regret. One cold and lonely night That was never made right. Sitting under a giant tree Talking, just you and me. You were acting so strange, I knew something's change. This is no longer working; Is it true what I'm hearing? What was I supposed to say So that I can make you stay. I am not easy I must admit; I've always tested your limit. Made things complicated, Leaving you so exhausted. Things hadn't been perfect, But this, I never did expect. Stared at you without a word, As my vision became blurred. You stood up after a while And I forced myself to smile. Tried so hard to hide my pain; Tears I made myself contain. Then you turned your back And I wanted to call you back; But my pride wouldn't let me Within me I just kept my plea. That very night I let you go Eventhough I still love you so. A night I will forever regret And will never ever forget. *For the 'REGRETS' contest. *Written February 11, 2013

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Date: 2/19/2013 4:09:00 PM
Grushen, congratulations with your wonderful win..Linda
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Grushen! Annalise
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/19/2013 4:51:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! :)
Date: 2/18/2013 3:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/19/2013 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/12/2013 2:31:00 AM
HEY GRESHEN THANKS FOR THE COMMENT ON MY VERY FIRST POEM I EVER WRITTEN IN MY ENTIRE LIFE...I JUST GOT MY MOJO FOR BEING SAD FOR A LOVE THAT CAN NEVER OCCUR BETWEEN US...IT'S A TRUE STORY OF MINE IN A HOTEL RECENTLY
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Grushen Guazon
Date: 2/12/2013 11:27:00 AM
No problem. It was truly beautiful. :)

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