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loss will one day resurrect its sum ~ good news for most too bad for some tough break for menippean efilists ~ living with sisyphus syndrome three rotating helios monokus ~ eternally rolling stones By David Kavanagh

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I Am Anaya

Date: 3/28/2023 1:09:00 PM

Shades of James Joyce? Maybe the man in question is contributing to your tumultuous state of mind, you are so wrapped up in his corrosive thoughts.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/28/2023 2:52:00 PM

I will be checking in on your page later I’m looking forward to reading all about the red bows, thanks so much for all your comments today, David

I Am Anaya
Date: 3/28/2023 2:03:00 PM

poetry crash course & research :D I'll be on my way...writing 'bout bugs and red bows. lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/28/2023 1:50:00 PM

Ha! I just like to let him know he will not have it all his own nasty way with utter impunity, sometimes a tumultuous mind is a handy tool for inspiration, especially when a muse goes on vacation, a little Joycean influenced yes, well spotted Anaya, you certainly know your stuff, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2023 1:02:00 PM

You can't help but pity the man because he's one mixed up individual who has strange beliefs with a hatred of everything. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2023 1:29:00 PM

Indeed Tom, as far as he’s concerned we’re the ones with strange beliefs, he thinks he’s a god and writes as if he’s an absolute authority on everything, he’s a great guy really, he even got into the spirit of our St Patrick’s day celebration lol, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/26/2023 6:27:00 AM

David, may I praise you for not being sacrilegious in your writes? Not much lower could anyone go than to use the name of Jesus in vain.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2023 7:17:00 PM

One day he'll take a false step and that boulder will end his pain of being such a miserable beast.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2023 6:44:00 AM

There is no need to be sacrilegious Jenna, But the guy in question has no respect whatsoever for others beliefs, he can continue his one man effort to push boulders up mountains for eternity, cheers David