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A Nice Touch

Hope I go in my sleep when my time's up Don't want pain and suffering, a scaredy old pup Just wish me adieu No fanfare or big shew With a sexy girl thing, that'd be a nice touch

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/18/2017 6:04:00 PM

I don't know how to respond to this poem Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/19/2017 6:15:00 AM

I hear for a long while yet! (methinks) Worry not sweet Patricia!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/18/2017 9:09:00 AM

Some want to die in the saddle//Some want to die in battle//Some with boots on//Would feel put upon//If the reaper said, "Hey dude, skedaddle!" STICK AROUND JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2017 11:19:00 AM

I'm here for the foreseeable future... no fear! Fit a a fiddle and ready for???? CHEERS SIR JOHN JOHN!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/18/2017 6:27:00 AM

You crack me up my friend! Yes, to be next to a woman that you love when you die would be pure comfort, though she would be extremely sad! I really enjoyed reading your exemplary poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a hilarious limerick, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2017 6:32:00 AM

LOL Sad and comatose!!! We never know when our time has come!!! HAVE A GREAT MONDAY SIR!!!