A Nice Touch

Hope I go in my sleep when my time's up Don't want pain and suffering, a scaredy old pup Just wish me adieu No fanfare or big shew With a sexy girl thing, that'd be a nice touch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:04 PM
I don't know how to respond to this poem Jack.
Ellison Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:15 AM
I hear for a long while yet! (methinks) Worry not sweet Patricia!!! xxx
Flats Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Some want to die in the saddle//Some want to die in battle//Some with boots on//Would feel put upon//If the reaper said, "Hey dude, skedaddle!" STICK AROUND JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:19 AM
I'm here for the foreseeable future... no fear! Fit a a fiddle and ready for???? CHEERS SIR JOHN JOHN!!!
Sivey Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:27 AM
You crack me up my friend! Yes, to be next to a woman that you love when you die would be pure comfort, though she would be extremely sad! I really enjoyed reading your exemplary poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a hilarious limerick, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:32 AM
LOL Sad and comatose!!! We never know when our time has come!!! HAVE A GREAT MONDAY SIR!!!
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