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A New Year's Day Haiku 2022

the old year flies away
the crisp fresh new year alights--
is it the same bird?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2022 1:40:00 PM

Well, I'm sure not an exact duplicate. I enjoyed reading this Senryu. Thanks for sharing and stopping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2022 5:10:00 PM

this little one is quite profound. i thought I would come say happy Bday. A little "bird" told me.

L. J. Carber
Date: 4/9/2022 4:45:00 PM

Ah, a wise little bird no doubt-- at 75 I'm trying to forget it!!! Thanks Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2022 3:16:00 PM

Probably not. There is always change. I enjoyed reading your thoughts penned in this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments were very encouraging. Sara

L. J. Carber
Date: 2/23/2022 3:35:00 PM

And thank you, Sara

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 2/5/2022 6:40:00 PM

Same bird?! Begone fowl fiend! May your year be crisp, fresh and toothsome, Len.

L. J. Carber
Date: 2/8/2022 12:21:00 PM

From your lips to God's ear, Geoff--but so far 22 looks too damn much like 21!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/7/2022 11:46:00 PM

That same bird visited me twice, once in 2020 and again in 2021, if I see it again I will shoot it out of the sky. Just kidding, but I could certainly relate to your well chosen words and concept in this unique haiku L.J. I have missed you and reading your poetry. I was away too long. It is good to be back. I hope you are well and that you enjoyed the holidays. New year blessings xxoo

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/9/2022 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Connie--very glad you are back in the 'Soup' as it were, and hope you are well-- may you and yours have a blessed 2022!

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/9/2022 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Connie--very glad you are back in the 'Soup' as it were, and hope you are well-- may you and yours have a blessed 2022!

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/3/2022 4:57:00 PM

God I hope not. We need some fair feathered uplift this year. What a downer this past one has been. Blessings my friend. Well said.

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/4/2022 9:21:00 AM

True, but in my 74 new years, not much ever seems to change--because human nature never changes--ve con Dios siempre, mi amigo....

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/2/2022 6:59:00 AM

Great one and good question. Happy New Year :)

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/3/2022 10:36:00 AM

Thanks Heidi-- you as well!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/1/2022 10:23:00 AM

Hello L. J. Carber, lets hope that the virus will end in the New Year. This change I would like to happen. Happy New Year. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/2/2022 11:13:00 AM

Hello L. J. Carber, afte rthe holidays the numbers went up. I would like to see the numbers go way down instead. Happy New Year my friend.

L. J. Carber
Date: 1/2/2022 5:46:00 AM

I'm with you on that, Darlene--may you and yours have a blessed 2022.

A New Year's Day Haiku 2022

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