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A New Species

A new species Cunning cheating and then fleeting, Machiavellian many crafting and contriving, Deceptive dishonest frankly defrauding, Slaughtering slaying bloodshed of massacre, Conflicts and combats enmity and warfare, Uncaring unfriendly barbarous and brutal, Savage sadistic Cruel and unsympathetic, Cold hearted cold blooded Insensitive Inhumane. Contrary to what God had created, Is it some new species ? Written April 5th, 2016 For contest by Anthony Slausen

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Date: 4/8/2016 6:36:00 PM
DEEP!!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:43:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your "New Species win." LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2016 8:18:00 PM
Very powerful and well-written, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:41:00 AM
Greetings, Dr. Upma A. Sharma. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Mankind's cruelty and greed have plunged this world in a chaotic state. God's holy laws have been replaced by its own. " Conflicts and combats, enmity and warfare " are on the minds of powerful nations even today. Peace is still a delusion for many. I thank you for your kind comment yesterday. Thanks for sharing your heart-wrenching poem. Enjoy your day, my friend. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 4/6/2016 8:34:00 AM
Indeed, mankind has perverted much of what God created! God forgive us and help us. This is absolutely great, Upma. Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 4/6/2016 8:10:00 AM
Wow this was spot on, piercing metaphors and rightfully so! Has what God created turned into...this? Superb, going into my favorites! And...Congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Dr Upma
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Date: 4/5/2016 10:09:00 AM
It is quite unsettling to consider the things 'this' species is capable of. J.
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Date: 4/5/2016 7:23:00 AM
Powerfully penned Dr Sharma with great allieteration - love your take on the theme - wish this was seen by everyone in the world! :-) hugs Jan xx
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