A New Reality

A new Reality is created,
When you sit alone.
Whether awake or sedated, 
Your mind will roam.

Suddenly your whole life is a daze.
You can’t see straight,
And you’re constantly in a kind of haze.

Although anyone can attain this anxious state of being,
Many people have decided that,
It’s no fun to be in.

Never spend too long,
Just thinking all alone.
Or you too will be in,
A Reality of your own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 10:27 PM
JOE, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
Yvonne Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Yvonne Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:21 AM
An interesting poetry with a unique philosophy. I enjoyed reading it.
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Magnificent write nicely expressed, congratulations on the win, Joe
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 1:11 PM
I love periods of peace and quiet but my mind doesn't wander to this degree but your words are wise:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Stan Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 4:14 PM
I am often alone and think endlessly. Every time, a new reality of my present is questioned. I can relate. Nice piece!
Gifford Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 12:50 PM
I've never had the experience you mentioned when I am alone with my thoughts, but everyone is different. I guess I am never truly along because God is always with me. I like to daydream though, and enter different realities, flights of fancy, that are fun places to visit.
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