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A New Love

We met one summer evening
On a golden sandy dune.
There was something wonderful and sublime,
Something magical and spellbinding,
Infiltrating in the air that night,
As stars shone brightly high above,
Shining for you and me
Especially for you and me.
 
Our friends were singing merrily,
Infectious love was all around.
There, on a spit, a piglet
Was slowly spicy barbequed.
The fire roared and spluttered
While fat dripped on its fiery flames.
 
It was a time propitious
For mad mid-summer dreams,
So we drank our lovely Chardonnay,
And nibbled luscious roasted ribs.
We exchanged jokes and reminisces,
Laughed all night long
You and me.
 
At last we left together
Shoeless strolled upon the sand.
Around was moon-lit and serene.
 
The swell of the sea supplied a lullaby,
Euphoria filled our mien.
I closed my eyes in ecstasy:
Heard your captivating laugh.
There in a desolate sandy beach
Away from prying eyes,
We knelt down, touching our hands,
Sweaty palms against each other.
I looked into your azure eyes,
Saw the vast calm ocean
With moonlight shimmering brightly.

I smelled your perfumed skin,
Felt your lips caress my cheeks:
Waves rolled softly towards the beach
In a splendid harmony.
Was this a pleasant fairytale?
Was it an infinite dream?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kitchin Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 4:00 AM
Victor, a wonderful romantic poem!
Y. Avatar
June 17, 2021 at 5:02 AM
WoW! Victor, You’ve penned such a beautiful and magical love story about meeting someone new. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Fairy tale or infinite dream or not, falling in love is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 10:32 PM
Magical and spellbinding verse, Victor. Hugs Eve
Foster Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 9:02 AM
I hope it was a dream... so it is truly yours... Kept close, as she wounds so lovely... Azure eyes... Wonderfully written. Ann
Daniel Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Beautiful and so magically romantic, Victor:) amazing:)
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Creative, expressive and emotive work. Very passionate. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Splendid images of romance beneath stars--magical tale this is Victor--dream or not! Enjoyed the details that build up the scene. Excellent write from start to finish.
Poet Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 3:34 AM
WOW, Victor What wonderful poetry, and what a wonderful evening with friends, and all the other lovely things mentioned, including (Our friends were singing merrily, Infectious love was all around) This is an exquisite artwork of painting with words and bringing a dream picture to life. Blessings and best regards
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2021 at 1:16 AM
A perfect summer romance Victor, it was so perfect you'd be forgiven to think it was dream. Tom
Alex Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 11:53 PM
Wow. Wild Imagination.
Buehler Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:43 PM
A perfect evening, on a romantic, moonlit beach, with good friends and good food-hope it wasn't a fantasy, though if it was, it was a nice one! :D
Seeker Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Victor, the endearing romantic!
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