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We met one summer evening On a golden sandy dune. There was something wonderful and sublime, Something magical and spellbinding, Infiltrating in the air that night, As stars shone brightly high above, Shining for you and me Especially for you and me. Our friends were singing merrily, Infectious love was all around. There, on a spit, a piglet Was slowly spicy barbequed. The fire roared and spluttered While fat dripped on its fiery flames. It was a time propitious For mad mid-summer dreams, So we drank our lovely Chardonnay, And nibbled luscious roasted ribs. We exchanged jokes and reminisces, Laughed all night long You and me. At last we left together Shoeless strolled upon the sand. Around was moon-lit and serene. The swell of the sea supplied a lullaby, Euphoria filled our mien. I closed my eyes in ecstasy: Heard your captivating laugh. There in a desolate sandy beach Away from prying eyes, We knelt down, touching our hands, Sweaty palms against each other. I looked into your azure eyes, Saw the vast calm ocean With moonlight shimmering brightly. I smelled your perfumed skin, Felt your lips caress my cheeks: Waves rolled softly towards the beach In a splendid harmony. Was this a pleasant fairytale? Was it an infinite dream?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/19/2021 4:00:00 AM
Victor, a wonderful romantic poem!
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Date: 6/17/2021 5:02:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You’ve penned such a beautiful and magical love story about meeting someone new. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Fairy tale or infinite dream or not, falling in love is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/16/2021 10:32:00 PM
Magical and spellbinding verse, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/16/2021 9:02:00 AM
I hope it was a dream... so it is truly yours... Kept close, as she wounds so lovely... Azure eyes... Wonderfully written. Ann
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Date: 6/16/2021 7:32:00 AM
Beautiful and so magically romantic, Victor:) amazing:)
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Date: 6/16/2021 5:59:00 AM
Creative, expressive and emotive work. Very passionate. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/16/2021 5:00:00 AM
Splendid images of romance beneath stars--magical tale this is Victor--dream or not! Enjoyed the details that build up the scene. Excellent write from start to finish.
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Date: 6/16/2021 3:34:00 AM
WOW, Victor What wonderful poetry, and what a wonderful evening with friends, and all the other lovely things mentioned, including (Our friends were singing merrily, Infectious love was all around) This is an exquisite artwork of painting with words and bringing a dream picture to life. Blessings and best regards
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Date: 6/16/2021 1:16:00 AM
A perfect summer romance Victor, it was so perfect you'd be forgiven to think it was dream. Tom
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Date: 6/15/2021 11:53:00 PM
Wow. Wild Imagination.
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:43:00 PM
A perfect evening, on a romantic, moonlit beach, with good friends and good food-hope it wasn't a fantasy, though if it was, it was a nice one! :D
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:05:00 PM
Victor, the endearing romantic!
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