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A New Look

From an eagle eye- my outlook; I looked and looked. My eyes on you- twinkling, as though I’d been hooked on you. “What do I do?” My world I thought you had ruled. Me, still look’n at you was unbeknown to me. Shiny dark, long hair; your eyes'o seductive, and body so inviting; dressed to thrill, like the erotic dancer, Mata Hari of the World War One you be. Heart shook. Eyes blinked, and I stopped to gaze as I agnized you got a new look. As phenomenal as the pages of an award-winning Poetry Book and a masterpiece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2014 8:25:00 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic work..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2013 5:20:00 AM
An inviting,sensuous setting. I like this one!
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Awolesi Oluwafemi
Date: 11/29/2013 8:59:00 AM
Thanks for the read and encouraging comment.

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