Dinda Minardi Poet Rhyme

A New For What Was Taken

(25/12/2011)

I don’t fancy what God did to 
me
I had my loss just yesterday
Last memory about her was 
when 
she smiled at me
Couldn’t believe she had gone 
away

Her life was to bargain
With this pure soul I have in 
my 
arms
Until I see her again
I promise I’ll protect him from 
harms

One life was taken, after one 
given 
for the forsaken
Life as it is, we have to 
surrender 
of what it has given

dinda minardi

* many doesnt know what this 
poem try to convey: it is a 
poem about husband's loss of
his wife because of giving birth to their son.

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Poet Destroyer A December 8, 2013 at 7:10 PM Dinda, , , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

Joseph May December 2, 2013 at 1:22 PM so sad ...congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2013 at 8:54 AM Congrats on the win, Dinda

Barbara Gorelick December 2, 2013 at 7:56 AM A sad experience is an understatement. Congrats on your win in the contest. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2013 at 5:37 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Dinda !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2012 at 8:33 PM who was this that you lost, Dinda? You have written in a way that shows a mature acceptance of God's plan.

Elizabeth Wesley January 15, 2012 at 8:08 AM Death is only a momentary experience till we rise at the resurrection. Till then, let the memories you have give comfort dear one. Sometimes our loss is another's gain.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2012 at 8:15 AM Sorry for your lost Dinda... some day (maybe) we meet again....my last poem is about my lost.oxox love Anne-Lise

Isa Mahrie January 14, 2012 at 5:17 AM life have many curves can be sweet can be bitter .... nicely written Dinda

M.I.A . January 14, 2012 at 2:42 AM if this is from RL, I am sorry for your lost Dinda. you conveyed deeply your emotions with a surprising distant feeling. emotional write wonderfully done

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 13, 2012 at 7:32 PM Yes life has amazing pain and amazing joys- loved your poem, may joy soften your pain, love, Brenda : )

Kash Poet January 13, 2012 at 11:26 AM A poem about some kind of separation I think....a touching write.Thanks for your so many sweet comments at my pages.

John Loving Iii January 13, 2012 at 10:22 AM When life is over we go to heaven. That is if we did what God wanted us to do.